
Cara Heath is the owner of With A Bullet, a radio promotion company based in Canada that has proudly been taking great music to radio since 2008. We have worked with The Pack A.D, The Gaslight Anthem, Born Ruffians, Heart, Leonard Cohen, In-Flight Safety, Fortunate Ones, and more…
Here is her challenge:
For this week’s challenge I want you to get into the mindset of self-editing. This is all about the radio edit. I want you to create a new song that would work currently at either Pop (Hot AC or CHR) or Rock (Alternative or Active Rock) Radio formats – your pick – but, I want you to write this song to be around 4 mins in length. Then I want you to edit it down to no more than 3:30 mins while still retaining the essence, dynamics, and structure of the song. If your original length is shorter than 4 mins still cut 30 secs out somewhere and if it’s longer than 4 mins you still need to get it down to 3:30. Things to help in the editing process: think about shortened intros, time to first vocals, time to first chorus, shortening / removing instrumental parts, shortening outros, etc. Get the point across quickly, grab your potential listener’s attention and have them singing along by the end of it! **These aren’t hard and fast rules when it comes to radio, but it’s always a great exercise for songwriters to practice the art and discipline of self-editing **
Connect with Cara:
www.withabullet.ca /www.twitter.com/withabullet / www.facebook.com/withabulletpromo
This is my submission for this last Challenge. Week 6 S.A.C Challenge for Radio.
Member Doug Taylor.
https://dougtaylorband.wordpress.com/2015/03/23/s-a-c-week-challenge-6-choice-1-song-for-radio/
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SAC Week #6 Writing For Radio
https://glenmacneil.wordpress.com/2015/03/23/sac-song-challenge-week-6-radio-edit/
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Dear Cara,
Thank you for a great challenge. I like short pop songs so it was fun to start off with something long for a change. It boiled down quite nicely too.
Hope you enjoy it.
https://soundcloud.com/proudfoot-2/get-it-right-this-time-radio-edit-mahendranproudfoot/s-kKFtH
https://uponblocks.wordpress.com/2015/03/23/heres-your-hat-whats-your-hurry/
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It’s a miracle- blog and song done hours ahead of time this week! Find out why here: http://juliemahendran.com/blog/week_6__songwritingblogging_challenge_2015/
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SAC Week #6 – Writing For Radio Craig McIvor and Kathryn Berry-Saugaveau)
Here is my submission for the Week 6 challenge with Kathryn Berry-Saugaveau. I have included links to both the original (4:06) and the edited (3:36) versions. Lyrics can be found on each of the soundcloud links.
Thanks again for this challenge. It was a great experience:
Edited Song:
Original Song:
Blog:
The soundcloud alias craigster67 is Craig Mcivor
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OK here is #6 – I had delusions of doing both challenges for week 6 but Christmas will have to wait. I did the radio edit challenge my blog is here: http://www.liminalmusic.com/s-a-c-challenge-6/ and my Soundcloud and lyrics are here:
https://soundcloud.com/liminalmusic-1/saints-and-sinners-radio-edit
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I did a re-edit of the intro – to get it faster to the singing! posted it on facebook, but thought I’d add the link here.. Blog has been updated as well! https://soundcloud.com/liminalmusic-1/saints-and-sinners-radio-edit
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And here goes the rockin’ roll… https://kathrynberrymusic.wordpress.com/2015/03/23/its-all-rockin-roll-to-me/
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Hi, this is my submission for the week #6 challenge, sorry it is not radio ready, but worth a try. Enjoy the melody……..!
The song is called ” The way you talk ”
https://michaelpaulvella.wordpress.com/
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What a week! Here’s my blog #6:
http://teapetrovic.tumblr.com
And radio-edit Pop song called “Boomerang”:
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Week 6 SAC Challenge – Thanks to my daughter Victoria for the co-write and the great vocals.rorypikerorypike.tumblr.com
https://soundcloud.com/rorypi/falling
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http://rorypike.tumblr.com
Sorry got the link wrong!
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S.A.C Challenge #6 Pop Radio, after lots of critics this week on this song “Open the Keys to My Heart”, it needs some lyrical changes to make more sense, tightening in chorus, and title change. But given the time for quality and losing my voice I am willing to make necessary changes to make it a hit. There are two versions below, the top one is progressive/soul/pop and the second progressive soul.
https://soundcloud.com/margroc33/openthekeystomyheart
https://soundcloud.com/margroc33/openthekeys-piano
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Blog:
https://fredbevan.wordpress.com/2015/03/24/sac-challenge-2015-week-6-writing-for-radio/
SoundCloud:
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Here is my song for Week #6 Radio Pop Edit. I really enjoyed this one (up my alley!) and I am getting the hang of drum loops and added a bunch of REAL synthesizers. (Performed and not programmed) which was really fun. Here is the secret link to “Bumma”
My Blog post is here: http://www.angelasaini.com/blog
Thanks!
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Here is my submission for Week #6: Writing for Radio. I have the link to the original and then the radio edit. Thank you for the challenge:)
RADIO EDIT: https://soundcloud.com/bernadette-saquibal/bernadette-saquibal-shared-love-radio-editsac-songwriting-challenge-week-6
ORIGINAL: https://soundcloud.com/bernadette-saquibal/shared-love-sac-songwriting-challenge-week-6-writing-for-radio-long-version
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Ms. Cara Heath, thank you for the challenge. Mine is not radio-ready, but it’s a pop song at 3:30, a modern pop song in the style of David Bowie’s “Ziggy Stardust” and Chris De Burgh’s “Spanish Train”. My song is called Escape Dragon. It’s a collaboration between myself (lyrics and vox) and Michael Paul Vella, who created the background music. Thank you to SAC, James Linderman, Debra Alexander and Lily Cheng! Also thank you to Todd Wandio for your encouragement on my dragon idea! Thank you to Michael Paul Vella for the backbeat! Hope this song keeps you running with the dragons LOL
My blog:
http://amsforartmusicsongs7.blogspot.ca/
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Week 6 Radio Edit Submission
Blog – https://johnpaulgeorgeringoanddon.wordpress.com/
Song – https://soundcloud.com/d2d-2/miss-satellite-radio-edit
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Here’s the Pop Song, written with Gordon Wong: https://soundcloud.com/adrianne_r/online-romeo-pop-radio-edit-sac-week-6
And here’s my short-but-sweet Blog!: http://adriannesoundslike.tumblr.com/post/114462810251/home-stretch-radio-length-pop-song-sac-week-6
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Sound Cloud:
https://soundcloud.com/hook-machine/online-romeo-adri-anne-ralph-gordon-wong
Blog:
https://hookmachinemusic.wordpress.com/2015/03/24/sac-blog-challenge-week-6-thats-a-wrap/
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Hi, this is David O’Reilly, and this is my Week 6 song submission and blog:
https://soundcloud.com/oreillysremedy/the-fall-songwriting-challenge-week-6
http://davidsongchallengweek6.tumblr.com/
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Here is my Week 6 entry for Option #1 – The Least I Can Do
https://soundcloud.com/jceej/the-least-i-can-do
And my blog entry – http://jceej.com/in-the-works
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My Blog:
http://thekatherinegracejournals.tumblr.com/post/114464699377/march-23-2015-11-13-pm
My Song:
https://soundcloud.com/katycarswell/702a
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Week 6 submission
https://kapzg.wordpress.com/2015/03/23/sac-challenge-week-6/
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Down to the wire.
My submission – “Rise” – a co-write with Ahi Izarh
blog: http://danielcjames.com/2015/03/24/rise/
song: https://soundcloud.com/danielcjames-1/risemar23
Sending good vibes…
DC
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Week 6 – Song for Radio from Krista White
https://soundcloud.com/kristajanewhite/week6challenge-2015-03-23-1033-pm
http://kristajanewhite.wordpress.com
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Ahkinoah H. Izarh & DC James’ week 6 song, ‘Rise’
Song: https://soundcloud.com/danielcjames-1/risemar23
Video Blog: https://youtu.be/Jv7Df158YYU
Full Blog: http://ahimusic.com/#!sac-blog/sac-challenge-week-6/
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http://joycegrennan.com/2015/03/24/week-6-s-a-c-song-challenge/
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https://soundcloud.com/joyce-grennan/blame-it-on-the-rain-by-joyce-grennan-2015
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Week six:
https://soundcloud.com/psbug/cry-for-you
https://seventhexit.wordpress.com/2015/03/24/week-six-a-song-a-pop-hit-no-not-really/
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Peter, I think it’s your best song too. Way to hang with the Challenge and thanks for playing!
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https://davestanleyonsongwriting.wordpress.com/2015/03/24/week-6-sac-challenge-rock-pop-radio-song/
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Down to the Wire. Week 6 Submission. Submitting for Rosanne Baker Thornley as well.
http://abeautifulcrash.blogspot.ca/2015/03/the-watchful-eye-as-once-again-time.html
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Soundcloud
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https://soundcloud.com/kristajanewhite/week6challenge-2015-03-23-1033-pm
http://kristajanewhite.wordpress.com
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INVISIBLE STAINS
Co-written by North Easton and I.
http://www.rbtsong.com/tell/
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Here My Week 6
https://soundcloud.com/larehard-1/blame-game-by-larry-maclean
https://larehardmusic.wordpress.com/2015/03/24/week6-sac-challenge/
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Week six…..
http://thoughtsandoddsandends.blogspot.ca/2015/03/sac-challenge2015week-six-rock-song.html
https://soundcloud.com/bombastic-bushkin/limo-dave-daoust-lucy-leblanc
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My week six pop tune…I know I’m a lil late but still hoping for a listening ear….
Song; https://soundcloud.com/leannelapa/the-fight-5
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Week 6’s submission. Late again…unavoidable :-(. With apologies.
Blogpost: http://www.lesliewoodsmeyersofficial.com/#!Week-6almost-there/czsv/5510db760cf21933cd0af7ad
Long version: https://soundcloud.com/leslie-woods-meyers/waited-for-you-leslie-woods-meyers-week-6-self-edited-version
Self-edit: https://soundcloud.com/leslie-woods-meyers/waited-for-you-leslie-woods-meyers-week-6-self-edited-version
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