By Christopher Ward
We’re almost halfway through the challenge! It’s been great to see all the songwriting and networking that has been happening on Facebook and on our blog. Hope you will enjoy this week’s assignment.
It’s easy to get caught up in using the age-old forms when writing a song – Verse/Chorus/Verse/Chorus/Bridge/Chorus. Yes, it works, but sometimes you can freshen up your writing and find yourself going down new pathways if you mix it up a bit. Something as simple as starting with the chorus like so many Beatle songs did (‘Cant Buy Me Love’, ‘Please Please Me’) and like Maroon 5 do in ‘Payphone’, can pull a listener in very quickly because they don’t have to wait for the big hook.
Using odd line lengths or unexpected rhyme schemes can get you out of a rut too. Remember – you can always get back in the box and colour inside the lines another time!
Deadline is March 10
Take a look at the video below and do the following assignment, posting in the comment section below:
1. Identify your common songwriting ruts. Why are these structures/forms comfortable for you?
2. Write a song that breaks 1 or more of these “rules.”
3. Have fun writing outside the box!
Ok here’s mine for week 3… got a little carried away and attempted some artwork for it. 🙂
Dragonheart- lyrics and song here: http://www.anastacemusic.com/blog/dragonheart
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That was awesome! dragons dragons!
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Very cool Anastace. It’s hard breaking our old habits.
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Well here is week 3 song : my-baby-makes-me-smile-week-3
Here is my week 3 Blog : http://www.goodrockindan.com/1/post/2014/03/thinking-outside-the-box.html
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Try this for week 3 Song :
http://soundcloud.com/goodrockindan/my-baby-makes-me-smile-week-3
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Happy March and happy Week 3 friends!
My Sound Cloud link to ballad called ” The Memory of the Light”
My website link: http://robyndewar.com/
My Week 3 Blog link: http://robyndewar.blogspot.ca/
Have a wonderful week-end! take care, Robyn
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Hello, here is my week three assignment. We have company coming this weekend so I had to get done early.. I had a lot of fun with this song, I’m trying to learn logic X as we do this and had some good fun there adding harmonies and background vocals. I’m still feeling like I’m singing super flat, so apologies for that, wish I had more time this week. Anyway I look forward to any comments or suggestions.
http://www.liminalmusic.com/s-a-c-songwriting-challenge-week-3-experiment/
https://soundcloud.com/liminalmusic-1/empty-spaces
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Here’s my week 3 entry “Sober Second Thought”.
The blog is at http://www.mattgerbermusic.com/
The SoundCloud link is https://soundcloud.com/matt-gerber
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Love the risk taking Matt!
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Hi everyone, we’re halfway! Glad to say this one went a little easier and faster as I left out the rhyme and the bridge . Here is my week 3 song “Each Child”
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Hi everyone, how’s the thinking outside the box for week 3 going?
I did something completely different this week, building on the Christopher Ward’s advice for weeks one and two as well.
Hope you enjoy the song, and thank you all for your great feedback on soundcloud!
The song is called “Bath Cat Opera”…does the title intrigue you?
Listen here:
Blog here:
http://amsforartmusicsongs.blogspot.ca/
Peace/love from:
Shera Shakera
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Well you wanted outside of the box! This song was inspired by my daughter loosing her tooth. She provided the fantastic drawing below. Also I have to credit to my son for the line “Then the tooth fairy said, what a grouch. He wouldn’t even let me put his tooth in my pouch.”I have never rapped before! lol
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Kimberley – I love your willingness to get out of your comfort zone!
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I’m putting much more detail in the blog and on our Facebook page, but in case this is where some are looking, the coles notes version:
The blog is…http://www.roysunstrum.ca/blog.html
And the song is both linked from the blog and directly at…
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1. Blog- http://scottmackay.ca/
2. Soundcloud- https://soundcloud.com/scottmackay/part-of-your-life/s-2QHgh
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Very cool lyric approach. Can you stretch more musically, Scott?
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Most definitely Christopher. My guitar player is starting to show me the ropes to help expand my musical knowledge which will open more creative doors 🙂 I play the banjo as well but for the most part I don’t move up the neck. This is what I’m starting to work on.
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Well, here it is. “Let the Light In” — my foray into..well, I don’t know what, exactly, but it was fun 🙂 I’m looking forward to relaxing and listening to everyone else’s contributions now!
http://www.kellymcquillan.com/happenings.html
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Really good song Kelly! Is there any way you could make the chorus stand out from the verse musically?
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Thank you, Christopher! I see what you’re saying about the chorus. I’ll have to think on that and figure something out.
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What a fun experiment! Certainly a challenging one, but it left me feeling like I had just had a great workout. After a few days of writing, here’s the result (Soundcloud link within the blog). Many rewrites yet to come!
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Hey Allister, I love how willingly you took up the challenge. Hopefully it opened some doors for you in your writing. Great work!
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Had alot of fun writing out of the box by not rhyming my verses and writing a song on the mandolin for the first time.
https://soundcloud.com/angelhousemusic/i-shouldnt-but-i-do-c-2014
joycegrennan.wordpress.com
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After a lot of fruitless experimentation, I decided to just get silly … and silly it is 🙂
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Really fun song Davy!
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Well, this is my first patriotic song….about an American flag.
https://soundcloud.com/midnight-mama-music/that-old-flag
http://thoughtsandoddsandends.blogspot.ca/
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Here’s the proper link to my blog: http://thoughtsandoddsandends.blogspot.ca/2014/03/week-3-sac-songwriting-challenge-time.html
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This was very busy, but fulfilling for me. My extracurricular activities all happen to end this week LOL. Well, I figured out this song in time!
I’ve not put a bridge in this song and it’s a style I’ve never tried.
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Very atmospheric track Vivian. Are there lyrics that might go with it?
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My common songwriting ruts are coming up with a chord progression, usually in a major key, and doing the verse chorus bridge tango.
This week, I focused on learning a new scale, a Japanese pentatonic, creating a moody layered soundtrack, and inserting one simple verse on two separate channels.
You can hear the result, “Faraway Road” here: https://soundcloud.com/todd-wandio/faraway-road
And read about the journey on my blog: http://www.toddwandio.com
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More falsetto, and the first AABA song I’ve done:
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Hmm, not sure why the link didn’t show, but here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/matthewhiscock/the-sunset-and-us
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Matthew, I really like the originality of your lyric approach.
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My goodness I can’t believe we are at the half way point! Week 3 was challenging and fun 🙂 Here is my blog and new song “Stop N’ Start” http://emilymacmusic.blogspot.ca/2014/03/week-3-out-of-box-and-into-frying-pan.html https://soundcloud.com/emilymacmusic1/stop-n-start-rough-cut
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Great work Emily!
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My computer has survived! Running a little behind this week, but here is my blog for week 3. Song will be posted soon.
https://amandabellemusic.jux.com/2621181
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song is now posted in the blog.
Here is the direct link
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Love the energy of this tune and the hooky interludes.
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Love how adventurous your writing is Amanda!
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I’m a little late getting my song in this week but here it is! It’s called “Oh La Da” and the idea for it came to me while I was busking.
SOUNDCLOUD: https://soundcloud.com/scottperriemusic/oh-la-da
BLOG: http://scottperriemusic.tumblr.com/post/79217178827/week-3-sac-songwriting-challenge
CHEERS! xox
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Cool song Scott. Really like what you’re doing melodically.
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Ahh…. time is such a thief. Soon I will steal some back from the bastard. Ddn’t complete the scratch and only a verse / chorus concept due to time constraints and excuses. 😉
Here is my accompaniment
https://soundcloud.com/robert-14-2/mother-mother-working-title-no
and the attendant Blog post too
http://rcampbell.com/index.php/2014/03/10/breaking-the-box-and-the-challenge-of-time/
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The blog: http://jonathanchurcherdotcom.wordpress.com/
The tune: DB Cooper’s Legacy https://soundcloud.com/seersongwriter
Jonathan Churcher
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I completely forgot to post it here!! Here you go – song is in the blog.
http://kristinestpierre.com/blog/blog/sac-challenge-2014-week-3-getting-out-of-the-box
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Wow Kristine! Such a unique song. Love when the groove kicks in. The lyric concept is really strong.
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Thank you!!!
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My week 3 song is at http:/soundcloud.com/kevin-roach-8 and my blog is roachtackle.tumbler.com
Thanks
Kevin
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I suppose it got missed cause I posted just the main link to it all in the first comment, but here’s my soundcloud link as well in case https://soundcloud.com/anastace/dragonheart
Is it better not to embed it in a blog? I mean, is it easier for you to find?
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Ah…yes…multiple postings. Here they are.
Blog : http://abeautifulcrash.blogspot.ca/2014/03/strong-sac-challenge-2014-week-3.html
Soundcloud : https://soundcloud.com/northeaston/strong-song-3-in-sac-challenge
Thanks for listening
North Easton
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Week 3 done! More than enough said in my Facebook post and blog.
http://www.tumblr.com/blog/rosannebakerthornley
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Here is my Week 3 blog: http://annidelsol.tumblr.com/
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Here is the link to Week 3 blog…Running late on the recording 😦
http://wp.me/p4m04c-1S
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Cannot open the page.
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Had some software issues yesterday and today, but here it is… better late than never! http://angelasaini.com/blog/blog/songwriting-challenge-week-3
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Great work Angela. There are so many rules to break!
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OK…so my last link did not work (and I am usually pretty tech savvy! LOL I guess not in the world of Blogging!)
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Keep forgetting to post the weeks assingment here. Here’s the Week 3 post that I posted in the Facebook group on Monday.
This was my most challenging week so far. I’ve only written one song before on a ukulele so I thought for this week I’ll return to it to write another. Lots of rewriting to do. I like the direction and groove but have lots and lots of work to do on it.
Here’s my 3rd week’s song – Someone to love
http://soundcloud.com/rogerbeckett/someone-to-love
Blog
http://rogerbeckett.blogspot.ca/2014/02/songwriters-association-of-canada.html
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Sorry for the lateness. Still feel good even submitting something that’s unfinished….better than not at all.
http://judiblueyes.tumblr.com/
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Very entertaining..quite funny….you seem to have a comedic streak; nice ad lib feel to the performance.
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Thanks so much….appreciated, considering how loosey goosey it is! Also, didn’t realize that we can respond on this page…..been focusing primarily on FB for communication amongst us….
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Here is the link to my blog post for week 3: Time to Experiment:
http://brooketurnermusic.com/songchallenge/week-3/
Here is the link to Soundcloud for my song, “Diamonds”:
Thanks,
Brooke
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Well … I’m so embarrassed. Not really, but my Week 3 entry is pretty late.
Here’s the link to my blog, and projected prodction notes: http://lairdwaynerose.blogspot.ca
And Soundcloud, if you prefer it: https://soundcloud.com/lairdwaynerose/afraid-of-love-gtrvcl-scratch
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I’m with Judy – better late than never – just lyrics for now too early to record and wake up the household. Will do later today. Onto cramming week 4 now – yikes! Oh I’ve never started a song with a chorus before, also wrote this differently – tried to focus on the lyric writing more, I have the tune of the chorus and verse but – could probably use a bridge in here or something.
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Started a song called “My Own Worst Enemy” but couldn’t bring myself to post it just yet. This is another recent one though that didn’t follow the typical pop pattern. I tried to just focus on a hook line that repeats. https://soundcloud.com/jesseweeks/just-go-with-it
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Really enjoyed this Jesse. Good songwriting lessons in your lyric too!
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For week 3 I experimented by moving away from the keyboard and picking up the guitar, and to write a non-love song, which was actually difficult for me to do.
Read my blog at http://maejanellemusic.com/post/79614773192/songwriting-challenge-3-experiment-week-3s
Song: “A Different Kind” https://soundcloud.com/maejanellemusic/songwriting-challenge-3-a
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I experimented by writing in a different style, trying to be more adventurous by using different modes in my melodies, using a different song format, using longer phrases, and using more descriptive language. It was TOUGH!!
My Blog: http://adriannesoundslike.tumblr.com/post/80009428144/week-3-belated-of-the-sac-6-in-6-challenge
My Song: https://soundcloud.com/adrianne_r/overnight-train-demo-week-3
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